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You're irresistible
You're unpredictable
You're seductive
You're restrictive

I'm original
I'm invisible
I'm repulsive
I'm destructive

I know
This love will never be
I know
That you won't look at me
I want to be
Your one and only
I don't wanna be
That one who's lonely
I want to be
The one with you
I don't wanna be
The one who's blue

I know this story
Faith is running short
Hope is disillusionary
Down to my last resort

I know I'll try
I'll look you in the eye
I know you'll deny
I'll end in my cry

I know
This love will never be
I know
That you won't look at me
I want to be
Your one and only
I don't wanna be
That one who's lonely
I want to be
The one with you
I don't wanna be
The one who's blue
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~Jakfan15 Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow this is cool
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!TheWandererNears Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:) thanks
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~Jakfan15 Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it was mad! :)
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!TheWandererNears Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)

I just want to point out that I loved the Jak and Daxter games
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~Jakfan15 Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They re totally awesome!!!
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This...is REALLY good.
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!TheWandererNears Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :3 as well as for the fav :)
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~melloattack Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this should be a song too.
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~cheddarofallcheese Sep 20, 2011  Student General Artist
... Sad? XD


Awesome poem as always :3
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~Ky1ieSmy1ie Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I really love the repitition in your poem. And the rythm (:
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