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You're trying
To figure me out
But I'm dying
I'll never be let out

My thoughts misleading
The hatred breeding
My end near completion
All my wounds deepen

I don't want to make things harder
I don't want to be another martyr
You left me before
I didn't know what was in store
I'm standing alone now
Pain I can't ignore
Sad forevermore
I fall down..

How do I describe what I'm feeling?

How do I give a clue without revealing?

How do I be near you without breaking?

How do I think of you without weeping?

My life's season
That of the demon
You're all I'm hearin'
The reason for my depletion

I'm never free!
Don't you hear my plea?!
You've hurt me!
I am debris!

I don't want to make things harder
I don't want to be another martyr
You left me before
I didn't know what was in store
I'm standing alone now
Pain I can't ignore
Sad forevermore
I fall down..

I fall down..
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I Fall Downby TheWandererNears

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Songs & Lyrics©2011-2014 TheWandererNears
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isasongs Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Really good, its good something different to it.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot :3
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
You use the word 'debris' a lot in your lyrics lol. I'm just saying xD Nice work =p
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I know, there are a lot of rhymes I use often, they just work though
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
Yeah they do its true. But that word isn't common.. only reading that you use it a lot :3
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EscapingThePast Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
"My life's season
That of the demon"

These are my favorite lines. :clap:

great write! :)
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :) I actually thought people would have been confused by that piece the most. Nice to see you like it :)
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PuzzledHeartBox Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011
Simply amazing, I love how certains phrases return in the poem.
Really nice work.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :3 Comments like that is why I write!
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melloattack Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
then put whatever you fel loke!!
LIKE SOMETHING OUT OF THE ORDINARY!!!!
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