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I'll be gone
I'll be gone
When you wake up..

I could see your pain
I'm sorry
Alone in the rain
I know the story

But now you're free
As I'm lost in the sea
The sea of loneliness
Forever in distress

Try to forgive
Try to forget
Try to live
Try to let .. go

When you wake up
I'll be gone
When you wake up
I would have moved along
When you wake up
I won't be watching over you
When you wake up
You would have no clue

Don't you worry
I won't be there
The past so blurry
The same we shared

This is more than I can take
And at sunrise when I wake
There will be no mistake
Better is what I'll make

Try to move on
Try to hold on
Don't forget me
Don't lose .. me

When you wake up
I'll be gone
When you wake up
I would have moved along
When you wake up
I won't be watching over you
When you wake up
You would have no clue

I know your face
I know your heart
I'll leave without a trace
Let you begin a new start

We lost our spark
Fell into the dark
And now we are lost
In this holocaust
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I'll Be Gone by TheWandererNears

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Mmmm, I really like this one.
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DSteffi Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Student Writer
Great flow of words. I love it.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot :)
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Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its so sad. this reminds me of what a close friend said to me once, so when i read this i almost cried.
it is very good though
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melloattack Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
this is realy epic i tell you mn.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, as well as for the favs :)
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melloattack Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
your welcome.
You deserved them C:
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cheddarofallcheese Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student General Artist
me: sad! :dummy:
me: .... :iconwthplz: thats not a good thing o.o
me::saddummy:
me: ....why did i just have an argument with myself??? XD
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Good question, but I think you won that argument
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cheddarofallcheese Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student General Artist
No I'm pretty sure I lost XD lol
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just-the-hands Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student Writer
Mmm, I like this one, too ~:3
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:) glad you did, and thanks for the favs buddy :)
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just-the-hands Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student Writer
You're welcome :D
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:3
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Aww this is really touching :3
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :3 Been trying to get into the more sad emotional poems, as opposed to my usual hate driven ones
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Ah, I see. I'm doing the same :3
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I noticed that.
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Cool. There's just a lot going through my head these days and its nothing good -_- more of those negativity drives that make go insane by the minute >.>
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Harness it, don't let it own you, dood
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Meh, I've had enough of living -_- so I'm praying that soon, one of these days will be my last.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aw come off iitt, you got a lot going for you. Once all the stress resides from the whole university thingy all will start to fall into place better
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