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It's an uneasy night for the undertaker
Raining cold darkened moon
Made a deal with the snatchers, a deal with the devil
Your thoughts are evil
And your words are dark

You wanna play God?!
And make some mindless drones?
You want to be Hell bound?!
And take on His word?
It will never work
You are not a God
You are the scum of the Earth
A sinful man
Seeking immortality


It's a cloudy sky as God is weeping
You sold your soul
To make creatures of the night
But you are not a God
These monsters have no soul
They will be your demise

You wanna play God?!
And make some mindless drones?
You want to be Hell bound?!
And take on His word?
It will never work
You are not a God
You are the scum of the Earth
A sinful man
Seeking immortality


By my words
You be bound
Into Hell eternally
By the light
You'll burn so bright
Your heart is in the void

You wanna play God?!
And make some mindless drones?
You want to be Hell bound?!
And take on His word?
It will never work
You are not a God
You are the scum of the Earth
A sinful man
Seeking immortality
You lost your mind
In the darkened light


You're so far away
Yet I feel you here
Have I gone astray?
Yet You're all I hear
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Recreation Inanimateby TheWandererNears

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Songs & Lyrics©2011-2014 TheWandererNears
Decided to try out a new lyric making technique I found. Tell me what you folks think. As you can see it isn't about rhyming as much as it is about the story it tells.

Also played with fonts during this as well.

I wrote this as I was imagining how the lyrics would sound, and I already wrote the bass tabs for it as well. So, it may seem like some things don't fit here, but in reality the smaller lines probably have prolonged words or something that makes it fit with the next line. So, keep that in mind.
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melloattack Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is beautiful. you have such a way with words.....
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:3 thanks
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melloattack Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;3 no problem your welcome!
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Zendar13 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Another awesome piece!
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cheddarofallcheese Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student General Artist
Epic!
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
Cool. Reminds me of my own work =P
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Sweet-Felt-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011
^^
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Ripplestar4 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love it!! Like I said before, I don't know a lot about poetry, but it's good in my eyes ^^!
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