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Closing this chapter-on my life
One more page~ to burn~
One more memory to ice~
Time to light a new lantern~

And now I can't remember
The life that we shared~
I could never be the blinder

No longer the one to define~ me
Budding a new beauty~

I won't miss you~!+

+Burning these candles
Cutting these cables
Broke free from these chains!
Free from your restrains!
From all of these battles
I won't be in shambles
I don't hear your call!
I'm no longer enthralled!

And now I'm gone~!+

+Burning these candles
Cutting these cables
Broke free from these chains!
Free from your restrains!
From all of these battles
I won't be in shambles
I don't hear your call!
I'm no longer en-thralled~!

Closing this chapter-on my life
One more page~ to burn~
One more memory to ice~
Time to light a new lantern~

And now I can't remember
The life that we shared~
I could never be the blinder

No longer the one to define~ me
Budding a new beauty~
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Time To Move On by TheWandererNears

/ / / ©2011-2015 TheWandererNears
! = Yell
~ = Dragged on word (drags on the word it follows)
- = quick break
.. = Sang sadly
() = What is in the ()'s are quieter
+ = Usually is part of a ~, it keeps going behind the lines that start with a +

At first I wasn't going to repeat the verse for the second verse, but for some reason it just felt like the song would sound better off if I made it this way. It would probably be a shorter song, like a 2 minute one.
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MicheleHansen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nicely written song. I should post my arias "The One" And "Hills of Mist." MANAVEL was originally concieved as an illustrated novel. Well, actually that was the wizard, Krovander's tale. The story kept growing, and went far beyond his rise from simple wizard to Feudal Nobility. Manavel's story is actually the end of the saga, but for me the most fun--probably because it is the culmination of everything that preceded it. I studied music (Digital Audio Engineering to be exact) and have been working on a libretto, and some melodies for translating the story into an Opera. (Wha-??? Me? Ambitious? Obsessive? LOL!!!) The nice thing about taking a story that can be told in 2-3 hours and expanding it is I get to play around with current trends. Like dropping in some steam-punk into the story, and other cool stuff like adding Justine's forehead piercing in her picture. Keep those loverly songs coming, my friend.
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is amazing!
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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HonourKnight Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Student
lol, i tried 'singing' along with the lyrics but started coughing. I have a sore throat. Strepsil time!! Man strepsils are nice, and slightly addicting.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lol..
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WaywardGypsy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I like the concept of lighting a new lantern :D
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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UpInFlamez Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
That's amazing.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:3!
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cheddarofallcheese Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
The lines that talk about burning the pages and chapters and stuff kinda reminded me of Diary of Jane :I


*I was wondering how old will you be tomorrow? ;D*
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Diary of Jane uses the same 'my life is a book' idea

I will be 20!
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cheddarofallcheese Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
20! :dummy:
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FreshlEBaked Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
I tried to match the flow with the indications you put on, I really liked it, I would want to hear it how you hear it.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks man :) Currently working on my vocal and bass skillz. As well as lyric writing skills. Once I feel confident in all three I will try a solo project of a song or two (I got a music maker for a cheap way to do the other instruments, but we do got a keyboard here, so I will probably do that myself as well) then recruit my brothers to piece things together better (one plays guitar, the other the keyboard)
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FreshlEBaked Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
Damn, sounds like you're pretty set. That's awesome! I don't have any means of making music besides writing lyrics. I've sort of been working on vocals myself, but I don't have much time to practice where I'm comfortable practicing, haha. That's good that you're so close to producing your music though, as a lyricist I know that I'm dying to hear my music, I'm sure you feel the same.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yessir, never felt any more in bliss than when I am singing. I am dying to get these lyrics into real music. I was the same way though, I had no means of practicing, until we moved a month ago, now I got my own room, finally (only been 19 years!) and now I can finally practice. Before that though I would watch videos on how to sing better and how to properly scream and all that shnizbit
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FreshlEBaked Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
Yeah, I know how to scream, I just need to get projection down, and that's the problem.
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