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What went wrong?!
What went wrong?!
I am trying so hard!
I let down my guard!

Can't you see?!
Can't you see?!
I gave you my all!
How did I fall?!

Losing sight on all that I'm passing
Holding onto all that I'm asking
As I look back it only makes me stronger
I will survive through this slaughter
With or without you here!

You should know!
You should know!
That I am dying here!
Don't you care?!

Where are you now?!
Where are you now?!
I can no longer feel!
Unsure of what is real!

I continue to hold onto this lie!
Looking for hope in the sky!
All I can do is cry!
Please just let me die!
What went wrong?!
What went wrong?!

Losing sight on all that I'm passing
Holding onto all that I'm asking
As I look back it only makes me stronger
I will survive through this slaughter
With or without you here!
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What Went Wrong?by TheWandererNears

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Songs & Lyrics©2011-2014 TheWandererNears
Whipped this one together rather fast.
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dawn181 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love this one, it's got a...flavor (yes I did just desribe words as having a taste XD) that I like.
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lol xP A flavor.. I think I am gonna start saying that now
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dawn181 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yay :)
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Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is cool
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^-^
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melloattack Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is this a breakup?
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TheWandererNears Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Completely up for interpretation, let your imagination run wild!
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melloattack Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YEEEAAAH it's totally a breakup.....
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cheddarofallcheese Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student General Artist
angerrrrrr :D i like the angry ones!
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