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Falling Asleep Now

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It hurts to love
But I love to hurt
I knew it'd be rough
But I knew once I heard

I heard your voice
I knew you were the one for me
All I could do was rejoice
When you accepted me

It's hurting me
It's breaking me
It feels like I'm naked out in the rain
Left all alone to endure the pain
Can't you hear me
Can't you feel me
I just can't explain
How hard it is to stay sane

You took my heart
You made it churn
Then ripped it apart
As you watched me burn

Like a falling leaf
I was only deceived
I am filled with grief
As sorrow was conceived

It's hurting me
It's breaking me
It feels like I'm naked out in the rain
Left all alone to endure the pain
Can't you hear me
Can't you feel me
I just can't explain
How hard it is to stay sane

So now I say my last goodbye
Would you care if I died?
You know you would hear me cry
If I saw you with another guy

I stared into your beautiful eyes
Digging into my soul like knives
When I heard your voice
I had no choice

I won't wake until the break of dawn
I won't break until I'm dead and gone
Drowning in the lake of feelings withdrawn
I can't undertake again being your pawn

I'll fall asleep now..
Miss me when I'm gone
I'm falling asleep now..
Sing me one more song
I'm asleep now..
I know I don't belong
I'm falling asleep now..

I'm falling asleep now..
This one was pretty nice to write, I enjoyed it.
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dawn181's avatar
..And I enjoyed reading it :) I love the rhythm. You need to teach me some day how to get good rhythm because you seem to have it down. My biggest fault in my writing is no rhythm :(